changed
some seek to be filled up
some desire a fullness
i seek a flowing
a passing through
i long to be an empty vessel
i don't crave nothingness
rather a desire to allow
all that comes my way
flow through me both
good and bad dark and
light the lilt of the highs
the sway of the lows
for how else can
i be changed if i
remain filled with the
past?

perfect!
Posted by: michelle | February 13, 2008 at 02:30 PM
Marilyn, it's funny; I know what you mean. I want to be like a piece of rigatoni (you know that tube-shaped hollow pasta) so that the spirit of the universe can flow thru!
Posted by: linda | February 14, 2008 at 09:13 PM
You have such a creative soul!! Beautiful
Posted by: shelagh | February 15, 2008 at 06:52 AM
wow. that is an {amazing} poem. it resonated with me. thank you x
Posted by: Penny | February 16, 2008 at 08:29 AM
Great imagery, Marilyn.
I like the idea of being an 'empty vessel' for everything to flow through, rather than filling up and stagnating.
Posted by: tinker | February 16, 2008 at 09:26 PM
this is beautiful - such a good reminder to flow with the Universe :)
Posted by: Leslie | February 17, 2008 at 05:09 PM
this is beautiful - such a good reminder to flow with the Universe :)
Posted by: Leslie | February 17, 2008 at 05:10 PM
Hi Marilyn. I love this poem. This is one I should print and hang by my door so that I can read it each time I'm about to go out into the world. I was particularly happy with the sound of the line created by your breaks: "light the lilt of the highs"--that's just a fun line to say over and over.
Posted by: Jon | February 21, 2008 at 05:40 AM
You are so tuned into the balance that is the universe... awesome! ;)
Posted by: Rob Kistner | March 10, 2008 at 12:37 AM